9月24日雅思大作文示范写作 | 机器人的利弊

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September 26, 2022

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本期作者：朱玲娇

2022年9月24日雅思大作文题目

Some people think that robots are very important to human’s future development, while others think that they are dangerous and have negative effects on society. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

范文及解析

Introduction

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The artificial intelligence is witnessinggame-changingdevelopment. While some argue that it may pose a threat to human beings andstallsocial progress, Ientertainthe view that it will make a huge difference to our future development.

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解析

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2011年的老题，审题上有一些易错点：some的观点落在关键词组future development，也就是写一些当下的好处而没有体现未来情况的都是跑题，比如：效率增高、便利，且论述均以“一般现在时为主”，也没有特别指出将来的时间点。others的观点落在dangerous，只有对人的生命造成威胁的，才能被称为“危险的”。因此，对社会的负面影响单纯落在“失业率增加”等老生常谈的观点上，是轻微跑题的。

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Ø game-changing adj. 变革性的

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Ø stall vt. 拖延

Ø entertain vt. 持有，怀有

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Body 1

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Of all the potential losses, safety issues are the immediate concern. To illustrate, as the working environment is extremely complex when robots are in use, designers may be unable to take all factors into consideration orpreciselypredict every possible accident. As a result, machines driven by theencodedprograms are less likely to react accurately when emergenciespop up, thus incurring heavycasualties. For instance, there have been several reports about themalfunctionof the AI technologyinstalledin transport or manufacturing industry. However, with repeated tests and regularoverhaul, those risks can be reduced. The automation technology is believed to eventually reach the high level of accuracy, precision, andsophistication.

解析

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让步-危险：设计人员对复杂的实际应用的预测有一定的局限性 à 已编辑并自动运行的机器设备可能无法应对真实情况 à 可能造成人员伤亡；// 反驳：多次实验模拟，技术发展，可以降低风险

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Ø precisely adv. 精确地

Ø encode vt. 编程

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Ø pop up vi. 突然出现

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Ø casualty n.[C] 伤亡人员

Ø malfunction n.[U] 出故障

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Ø install vt. 安装

Ø overhaul n.[U] 检修

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Ø sophistication n.[U] 精密度

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Body 2

On the other hand, the machine learning technology matters a great deal to the future development of mankind. To commence, such technology canuprootthe problem brought by the ageing population. Owing to the longevity of pensioners and lower birth rate, an increasing number of countries, especially developed ones, areplaguedby inadequate labor force, and such insufficiency is projected to beintensifyingin the future. In this case, robots can act aseligibleworkers and well perform sundry tasks in workplace even with less faults. Besides, people will lead a more convenient life, with intelligent machines to offer 24-hour services, which will reduce and costs of employing more staff to work in turn and meanwhile motivate people to engage themselves in more advanced fields.

解析

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立论-对未来发展的好处：（1）一些国家人口老龄化问题在未来可能加剧，机器人可以充当劳动力；（2）提供24小时服务

Ø uproot vt. 根除

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Ø plague vr. 困扰

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Ø intensify vt. 加剧

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Ø eligible adj. 合格的

Conclusion

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In a nutshell, artificial intelligence, negative social impacts though it may bring, will play an indispensable role in future development.

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